Hello I trying to make the thesis for my textual analysis essay for the article

Hello I trying to make the thesis for my textual analysis essay for the article “Some Lessons From The Assembly Line” by Andrew Braaksma. My instructor says my thesis inst well written. I’m missing the main claim and the three key points. Can any one assist me?
The main claim of valuing the importance of education to better secure a career was effective because having an education and experience can obtain a better job; if a job goes overseas, it won’t be harder to find another decent paying job with the knowledge to back one up. Also having to work less laborious work for potentially more pay than working without it.

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