I will pay for the following essay Short story Critique. The essay is to be 1 pa

I will pay for the following essay Short story Critique. The essay is to be 1 pages with three to five sources, with in-text citations and a reference page.
There is a sudden change of tense from the present to the past in the middle of the story, which needs to be addressed. The last paragraph could be re-written: although the idea is good, the writing does not match the level of the earlier paragraphs and the last three sentences seem