You have a lack of specific research and statistics. you do have some general things stated, but need much more hard facts cited.

Success In Organizational Leadership- In Conversation, Esp Fierce Ones Paper instructions: Here is the link to my paper that is in turnitin.com. If you click on œgrademark it will show you all of the errors. It is crucial that the errors are corrected. I did attach the original paper as well. Also here is feedback I receieved. 1) research tone “ in too many places you are expecting the reader to rely on you as the expert. Instead your tone should be that of a reporter- sharing what the professional sources say. You must always have research backup for any statements you claim as fact. 2) You have a lack of specific research and statistics. you do have some general things stated, but need much more hard facts cited. 3) In many cases your writing/meaning is unclear “ thoughts within paragraphs seems disjointed and fail to make a clear meaning. There are extensive notes about these directly on your publish which I hope will help you see what I am referring to. You need to lift the level of your content significantly for a passing grade on the project. Well-written, good grammar and mechanics: 13/20 many errors. See specifically within the publish. You will want to have some help with proofreading and rewording some of your sentences. Well-organized “ Flows well, headers and headings, page numbers: 13/20 You do have headings, but in many cases those headings do not accurately describe the content. Your intro needs a lot of work (see notes on publish). Your whole organization needs to be reworked and I have given you some direction with this that I hope will help“ at the end of your publish. Title page, abstract, and reference page are present and of reasonable quality : 8/10 see notes about abstract In-text references and reference page in correct APA format: 7/10 You do have some in text citation but need much more.

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